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i want to send my english songs and their registration

DEAR SIR / MADAM, IAM SENDING A SONG FOR YOUR CONSIDERATION PLEASE SEND ME YOUR REPLY AFTER CONSIDER THE SONG SONG IAM GOING BYE BYE BYE BYE DEATH IS CARRING ME AWAY DON'T CRY EVERY BODY COME WHEN I WAS DIE NOBODY HAS COME WHEN I WAS ALIVE....IAM GOING BYE BYE MY BODY IS MIXED WITH CLAY MY SOUL IS GOING TO FLY...IAM GOING BYE BYE LIFE IS NOT IN MY HAND O DEAR IAM LEAVING YOU WITH CRY....IAM GOING BYE BYE WHOLE LIFE MY EYES WERE WET NOW DEATH MAKE THEM DRY-----IAM GOING BYE BYE BYE BYE i can write more songs if i could get an opportunity from your side. looking forward to your positive response in this regard thanks and best regards kamal kishore
By: Guest
Date: Thu-Feb-18-2016-
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This songs feels as if you are a chronic patient and you are going to die in very near future. ..Just joking..LOL

Also, You need to improve grammer, you have to use better deep words.
So small song with very little substance is not going to be a hit in anyone's mind.

It's a good try as a beginner and you can keep imroving in future with more writings.

Read the lyrics of all other hot songs to get to know more skills to improve.
Good
luck.
[d] By: Guest
Date: Thu-Feb-18-2016
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Review your song
what is the title
check for grammar and spelling
check for clarity
think about what you're trying to say.
the song must have a meaning because its confusing

Recommend sites that you should visit..click on the links. If you wish to locate other sites, just type in google "how to write songs"

How to write song lyricsRead this article and learn how to write song lyrics by organizing your thoughts and ideas!
http://www.essortment.com/howtowriteson_...

How to write a song - songwriting guide.Learn how to write a song here. Follow our songwriting guide. Learn how to write a song with these songwriting tips and ideas.
http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/how-t...

How To Write A SongLearn how to write a song. From finding the title to a finished lyric and melody. Use hit songs as patterns to write sellable songs of your own.
http://www.robinfrederick.com/write.html


Good Luck
[d] By: Guest
Date: Thu-Feb-18-2016
Response
What is 1 + 100



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